This is a really nice one shot! It's a well written snapshot of when Yomiel was suffering so much and I found it very interesting. I love this game so I'm really pleased to see any fanfiction for it. Thanks so much for sharing!

Whoa. This was really AMAZING!

I forgot this game even had a fandom! But like you said, it really is an amazing game, so of course I came to check this out when I got the notification email.

You honestly make writing one shots look easy, because you do it so well. I like this a lot, it's an interesting insight into Yomiel's thoughts, hope you write more for this fandom :)

Lizz

Aww, that's so sweet! Thank you for writing this.
:)