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| gd 2007-04-21 ch 9, anon. | abusegfdg |
| -x-fluffy-sama's mate 4-eva... 2006-05-07 ch 9,  | abusei luv it! but y havent u updated in such a long time! i wanna no wut happens next and when is vegeta and serena gonna meet! |
| hi 2006-03-12 ch 7, anon. | abuseIs her father Bardok? |
| bubblegumb1 2005-09-23 ch 9, | abusei m just found this story and i must say, i am intruiged(sp?). it does seem interesting so far. But i just want to let you know that when you're doing conversation, that you should type it like this. "Where are we?" asked Serena "Dunno," replied Lita, "Let's take a look around." What i mean is that everytime someone says something it should be put down onto the next line. It makes reading much much easier. I'm sure you'd get more reviewers/readers if you did that, because the format that you have right not kinda makes the eyes hurt. Other than that i'm very interested in the plot, when's the next update? |
| serenitynight 2005-08-12 ch 9, | abusethis story is soo cool. i really hope that you update soon. is her father chronos? or is it vegeta? |
| animechick 2005-06-28 ch 9, anon. | abusewow this story is kinda sad but update it soon also please e-mail me when you update |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 2005-05-04 ch 9, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE. |
| storywriter10791 2005-03-17 ch 9, | abusethis is great! Please, update this as soon as possible! |
| Kallista Starshooter 2005-01-02 ch 9, | abusecool man!! i've read alt of these stories but not one whare veggie head's wife didnt want the kid |
| Rose 2004-12-17 ch 9, anon. | abusePlease finish this story, it's good so far. It would be neat if Vegita and Serena go together, & that Kami still tought her how to fight. :) |
| Matthew Blackheart 2004-11-10 ch 9, | abusecol i think this is an awesome story please have Vegetasai reborn and its spelled namik and namikian |
| momocolady 2004-11-07 ch 9, anon. | abusegood story,I like it,please update soon,bye |
| DeLa Lune 2004-08-26 ch 9, | abuseo. this fic good. please put up the next chap soon. |
| lisha 2004-08-25 ch 9, anon. | abuseplease write more of this story i would like to read more . it is very interesting. |
| Allison 2004-07-20 ch 9, anon. | abuseI'm a little dissapointed that you brought the dbz characters out so late, but i really do like the story. I'd appericiate it if you would update soon. |