Phew! I'm so sorry I couldn't review this earlier. I wish I could give a more in-depth review, but I have little time left in the day. But you already know how much I liked the chapter, right? :D

Especially the parts with Taruru. I liked those the best. He's so funny. XD

This is really good. Your writing got me interested right from the begining!

(If I could, I would do everything Zoruru had done...especially the fainting part...I usually knock out...)

Why not Garuru? (chapter 18)

I really like this story! I think it is so amazing that they could put this into the manga/anime. I love it so freaking much! -

About the end... Garuru why not?

About the end... Garuru... why not?

About the end... Garuru... why not?

about the end... Garuru... why not?

Fantastic chapter as usual! I love the thought of Garuru having his owb moments of weakness xD lol at his seasickness, poor guy.

I see you referenced your other story xD interesting. I like how I was able to catch that. I like the thought of Zoruru being a pirate. Its like a mixture of a pirate and a ninja, and that's epic. Sad for him, though.

Lol, Taruru French kissing the floor XD I can see that happening.

Ooh, this was pretty scary! You know how to write very good horror. The pacing and revelations were done quite well. Have you ever seen the movie ParaNorman? The girl in your chapter reminded me of the girl from there. Very sad. I hope she can rest in peace.

Evil clown robuts, huh? XD Now I'm curious!

This was pretty good. My heart went out to that poor little girl :(
You did really well with balancing the horror/sad/funny. One moment I'm feeling bad and the next I'm laughing at Taruru's antics XD It's really good comedy relief; you don't want to be making anyone feeling too sad or scared. Making them laugh a little in between, before, or after is a perfect way to bring anyone up.
I'm glad this was long; it was nice to read and it was well paced.
I can't wait to see what else you have in store.

No apologies! I enjoy it when a story plays with genres, and you did it well.

Poor Keronjins though...I want to give them all a hug.

KDS here...
Why did I have to go and read other reviews... Now I feel lazy... Really lazy... *Sigh*

Sorry for being lazy!

KDS here. W O W ... It took me THREE DAYS to read this chapter. I can only imagine what it was like writing it! Well, actually I don't have to imagine, cuz I'm writing my own FanFic. It stars the characters in the Meiyoyo platoon... It took me forever to come up with Kisusu's nicknames for everyone... And I'm adding more characters! So... Tired... Now I gotta nap.

"I just know someone is going to end up getting stupidly hurt around the ship at some point."
Ooh, do I sense... foreshadowing? BP

"Urgh, Taruru logic."
Don't question it, Pururu. It's bad for your health, remember?

"I caught them and I was going to kill them, but that dumb little fish face moron, Taruru, ran in and shit me with his stupid laser."
Uhh... did you mean "shot" here? You might want to fix this, you know, just to make sure people don't get the wrong idea.
I think the lines following afterward were best though.
"This time I was caught a little off guard. I am ashamed."
Yeah, I think I'd be ashamed too if a laser shit on me.
;) I'm jus' jokin'. You can go into the doc manager, fix that up, and then go into Manage Stories and swap out this chapter's content with the edited document. Easy peasy.

That's right, Zoruru. You use that video to torture your next victims!

"Once he stole my nose right off my face! He never gave it back either…"
Uh, Taruru, I don't think you ever had a nose to begin with.

Okay. Done reading now.
I... wow. That was pretty good. Okay- not just pretty good- that was great.
You got everyone so in-character; don't you dare doubt that! Garuru was cool and collected, and he reported things as instructed; Tororo's was irritated and even a bit bratty and devious, just like him; Zoruru's was vengeful and felt like he really didn't want to be writing that (which also, from what he first said, makes me feel as though he might have dyslexia...); and Taruru's was... Taruru's was derpy.
I must admit that I did not expect that Barney thing. But it was done rather well and... well... yes, I was laughing a lot. (;
I love how you wrote it in different perspectives. It was so interesting to see the whole story unravel with each new account from their views. Taruru had such a positive outlook on it, that little oblivious guy...!
Shame you aren't doing another one of these again. (; But it really is a once-in-a-while thing; any more and you'd be tired beyond belief. Get some rest, ok? You deserve it! :D