I like the poem, very simple but all the same the characters are alive

LOVE IT!

Aw! That is so sweet and cute. I love how you avoided saying their names yet made it clear who they are.

Hehehe... I love it!

Dear Sunfreak,

Me again! Like I said, I went straight to your Bio and read more of your postings. I seem to be injoying them.

I give you a 10 out of 10 stars.

See you in another review soon.

Starlit-Knight

...blunt...but cute _

*scratches head* I think I've read this before...but it's great! O.O

Hehe...very adorable, I smiled all the way through this one. Comparing this to the "soccer" poem, I definately like this better...the soccer poem was more interesting as a poem, but it didn't fit very well as a character piece. This was so vivid I could practically see it, and it was lovely _

woot. perty!

hehe! the ending's so cute! ack! ur such a good writer! i loved it!

*sniffles*

That soooooooo sweet. I'm a firm believer in Touya x Yue... and Touya x Yukito... and Yue x Tukito...

*gets hentai thoughts*

Of course theres nothing wrong with all three of them being together either ne?

Excellent poem. Just lovely. _

Aa! Go Yue! Heh heh heh, I really like that poem. Though I think it could have been a pretty good ficlet. Aa! but, I like the poem, it has flavour, romance, and humour. Very artistic, and a nice selection of words to enhance the flow of reading. A very good piece, says I. I loved it to bits.

Once again, a brilliant opem by the oh so brilliant Sunfreak. All worship at your feet!_