its ok things happen. I havne't updated my story on christmas even though i said I would XD

Hello. I'm the same Guest from last time.
Don't worry! Loads of People do that everytime!

Because of Schoolwork, Chores, Daily Duties, Bad Situations, many types of things!

Just please... use this advice.
Don't just put the Chapters and write them everyday... right now, don't just put the Story.
Maybe just write as much Chapters as you can, then maybe you could put it in Fanfiction. Everyday, just like you thought of.

Merry Christmas! I hope you'll get lots of Presents!

Great story, though it has a few problems in my opinion(of course, I admit to being a grammar nazi).
*It has random capitalization
*The story progresses too fast for my taste, such as how few details there are when they made the presents.
Besides those two problems, I love the story.

Yowzers! What a spectacular story you've got there! I can't even describe about this! It's extremely riveting... I'm speechless. You have such stunning talent! :)

CUTE! keep writing pleeeaaasee!? Other people should read this too.