Reviews for The Beggening
SmilesSaveLives 5/8/13 . chapter 5
OMG OMG OMG! First of all, AMAZING CHAPTER! I loved Nisroc's constant thinking of her and how she was thinking about him too. And then AHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG SHE RAN INTO ANASTASIA AND DRAGON! OMG I JUST LOVE THAT! Are they going to be important throughout this story? Wait...Dragon mentioned a monster...ARE YOU REFERING TO THE RAVENMOCKER THEY SAW IN DRAGON'S OATH?! THAT IS SOOOO SMART! OMG I just love this story! Update super soon please!
-Smiley
Guest 4/22/13 . chapter 1
Please update soon I've been waiting sooooooooooo fricking long for the next chapter I'm gonna explode! Pretty please with sugar on top update :)
Elysse Raven-Rose 3/14/13 . chapter 4
please add more soon i love this story :)
Guest 2/12/13 . chapter 4
Will you update soon? I really like this story please don't stop writing.
SmilesSaveLives 1/5/13 . chapter 4
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Okay, I seriously think that Jonathon and his son Jacob are gonna be linked to Cindy's death (cause she has to die cause she's a ghost in the real serious, right?). I like how Charlotte assumed "Ni-Ro" is just an imaginary friend...I would laugh so hard if she ever met him. CINDY IS SO FREAKING ADORABLE! *hugs Cindy* I don't want her to die and become a ghost...
-Smiley
P.S: UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Stephaim Fan 1/3/13 . chapter 4
:0 Everything makes since to me now. Still I want to know if I'm right so update soon!
Elysse Raven-Rose 12/21/12 . chapter 3
totally awesome please don't keep us waiting for more! :)
SmilesSaveLives 12/21/12 . chapter 3
OMG I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! EEP! Omgod Cindy is so damn cute! She's kinda like the little kids I know...AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! And, YAY, Nisroc promised to see her again! :D I am quite excited right now, sorry. OMG update soon I just love this story!
-Smiley
SmilesSaveLives 12/9/12 . chapter 2
OMG LOVING THIS! Can't wait for more! Update soon please!
-Smiley
SmilesSaveLives 12/9/12 . chapter 1
OMG I LOVE IT! And, wait a second...THERE IS ANOTHER CHAPTER! YES! This is really good! I loved the one-shot and I'm glad you're expanding on it. EEEEPP!
-Smiley
Elysse Raven-Rose 12/5/12 . chapter 2
i sure did enjoy it :) your going really well, can't wait for the next chapter i love the idea you have about these two keep going it's really good :) shame Cindy's gonna die you can't help but love her :)
Stephaim Fan 12/5/12 . chapter 1
Well I guess you already know I like the pairing but I still think you wrote it really well! update soon!
Elysse Raven-Rose 12/2/12 . chapter 1
it's a fantastic start I'm hooked! i can't wait to see what happens next! :)