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| Reviews for The Disappearence of the Pokemon |
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   Pichufan 12/7/12 . chapter 2Nice story. I would suggesr that you add more derails to the sentences. It sounds like a book of facts. He went into the citchen. He took a knife. He took an apple... You know what i Mean? Have a nice day! |
| ddf 12/2/12 . chapter 1 HOLY SHIT THIS IS EPIC. First fanfiction story I have read. Great intro to the world of this website :) |
