|Reviews for The Disappearence of the Pokemon|
| Pichufan 12/7/12 . chapter 2
I would suggesr that you add more derails to the sentences.
It sounds like a book of facts.
He went into the citchen.
He took a knife.
He took an apple...
You know what i Mean?
Have a nice day!
| ddf 12/2/12 . chapter 1
HOLY SHIT THIS IS EPIC. First fanfiction story I have read. Great intro to the world of this website :)