Ooh. This was really good. I loved the slow unfolding. For some reason it reminded me of an old X-Files episode. But this was really…pretty. I know it's sad and depressing but it was also poignant and just really lovely to read. Wonderful job.

I cry. Looking down see me crying see me crying see me cry. It so beautiful. Very good job.

This was utterly fantastic! Every word was engrossing.

You just ripped out my heart and stomped all over it with your beautifully tragic story here. :') Poignant and emotional, and very subtle at times. Loved it!

Wow, so fraught and emotional, I like it. Mal is excellent here, I love the way you used her.

I write Arthur/Eames too, feel free to check it out ;)