"She kept them in her pocket, the names written in marker across their full metal jackets." 'Full metal jackets' - Is that a pun, by any chance? :D

Ahh... what a nice read. Wonderful work, it was fun to read. And something refreshing in to the world of Royai Fanfiction. Lovely work.

This was great; very in-character, very revealing about both Roy and Riza in little space. I like that you added a bit about Riza having earned medals for bravery but not being able to look at them. It seems very fitting for her. I also enjoyed the way you played on their relationship - the way you blatantly state that there's love between them, and yet you don't suffocate the reader with that fact as many authors tend to do.

Great job, keep writing :)

LOVED this!

Riza SHOULD have gotten a medal for not shooting Hughes and Mustang...those two must have driven her insane!

Bravo! I love this story.

Excellent job!