LUVED it! :)

sque cuteness! you are such a fabby writer, specially the loki/bartleby stuff (my fav dogma ship *grin**grin*)

AW i loved it so sweet and cute!

I love how you add the ad-libs at the end!! XD So funny! The story was awesome. MORE!

That was sweet

Awsome story! I loved reading this.

Aw, I love it! Angst is good. :)

:| Aw.. I liked that. So sweet...

i liked it. it wasn't too sappy...it was just cute perfection! :P
sadness that matt and ben never actually kissed in the movie...(sigh) but s'okay. there's always fan fiction! lol. *g*

I love it when fanfic authors put quotes in there from episode to tie up where they are in the plot so hats off to you. Short,but an enjoyable read. Keep on truckin' or typing whichever. Adios/.

Aw this is so cute! I don't know how you can continue this. I just think you should write more, because this was great.

"He tore open his shirt as Bartleby had down,"

Mmn. Sorry. My inner beta-reader can't let this stuff go.

Beautiful ficlet. I correct 'cause I love.

very cool...i was kind of wondering about that myself...the wings i mean...and they make such a great gay couple.

A little bit disjointed -- but not terrible. Could have used a little expanding and clarifying. Still, it was sweet... not so much sap as I thought, just sweet. Congrats.

It did fill in the empty space rather well. I like, I like.