Wow. I'm breathless. that was beautiful. The ending was very endearing, and I'mk glad Chichi was there for my little Gohan. Your work is very wonderful.

that was a really sweet songfic!

omg... I'm so depressed I was crying by the 2nd paragraph.. I loved this. Keep it up :) Becky

*sigh* i'm so glad Gohan didn't try to commit suicide in this one! *sniff* poor Gohan... IT'S NOT YOUR FAULT! *passerbys stop and stare as she flails her arms about, crying and screaming* erm... *rubs the back of her head* but it isn't... ah well. this was really good! _ so THIS is the Gohan fic you told me about? _ yay! please write more lil' Gohan-chan fics! please? okay, byeth byeth!

*tears fill his glistening ruby eyes. He touches his keypad slowly, and a machine speaks* That was so touching and beautiful. The ending was so positive that it made me smile. Good work on this fic.