amazing!

Awesome!beautiful piece

Christian is even a fairly mild sadist/Dominant. There's no hard stuff in any of his playing. I am sure he can get the subs to scream, but that's what THEY CRAVE. It's not really about tasting your own medicine, it's two consenting adults playing games together. It should never be forced on anyone just as nobody should ever get to dictate what other people do to each other behind closed doors. I wish FSOG had portrayed BDSM as what it is, not like some symptom of earlier abuse. BDSM is not and should never be abuse.

Finally someone else who read it for the story not the sex

one word, PERFECT :D ... the story was great, and this is my favourite chapter, you did a really awesome job :)

..love your story's..

I'm sorry but this completely puts me off your story. If that is your idea of what BDSM is then I feel you should not incorporate it in your story. You don't even seem to have researched it but just decided that the person who inflicts the pain is the bad guy. Sure, whoever is dominant can in some cases abuse the power he/she has but it is a MUTUAL agreement between two people capable of making their own decisions. So in this kind of agreement, Christian Grey would not be "hurting all those Subs" but giving them exactly what they wanted. I'm apologize if I seem mean, I should perhaps not be so hard on you though since the original author of the series your writing fanfics from didn't have many of her facts straight either...

O M G THE FEELS. I WAS LITERALLY SCREAMING.

beautiful

Have you thoought of writing a second part too the story..it was too good too stopped..maybeit can be part Teddy finding love. Or love finding teddy

aww...i love the story...it melted my heart... 3 :))

You should write another fanfic where like you talk about teddy and whoever he s going to be with and you can connect it to this story or you can write about FayXJonathon .

Aw! Just perfect! Merry Christmas too you as well!

Love end to a story hope you will write more 50 shades fanficts

Great chapter. Love this story. I love when an author completes a story, thank you.

Great chapter, will you be writing a sequel?