oh hey, i forgot i was even following this story. I really hope you get back into it, as what i saw here was incredible. Nowhere near enough good Axton-centric fan stuff. Solider-siren does seem to be canon, so why not? lol. (though I'm going down Axton/Gaige in my story. Because robots and turrets, that's why.)

I'm really looking forward to how you write Dahl, as I imagine them to be miles more competent than Hyperion.

Loving this fic. It's one of the better ones in this site. Please do continue with this one. I have never read an Axton/Sarah fic and this one shows a lot of promise.

I want a ticket for the Zero/Angel ship.

Krieg!? Please let Krieg appear in this story! He's not even available on BL2 yet and I already love him.

This fic is great! I really like how you're deepening out Axton's character (I also thought he'd be the slightly more level headed one) and it all ties together really well. Looking forward to the update and more badass black combat armour.

Even though there's not a whole lot to go on yet, less than 2k words and all, I like the premise (I don't think I've seen a single other story on there that really features, as I assume this one will, Axton's wife) is good and your writing is clean and clear, which is much more than most can say on this site.

As I talk about clean writing, please ignore the giant run-on sentence above. :P

Anyways, looking forward to your next update! :D

"Mordecia"? when did mordy become a girl? i kid, i kid. welp, consider this appetite whetted. i see mostly gaige or zero stories here, not much axton. I always thought of axton's cockiness and glory-hounding to be a cover/defense mechanism. under that i think he has leader qualities.

and if that fight is an indication of what's to come, im intrigued.

Getting into a fight with Axton? Possibly pissing off the 8 Vault Hunters? Man, this Dahl guys are stupid.

What you got so far sounds like an interesting summary. But a summary - used as incentive to maybe read the first few paragraphs. The length is really, REALLY short. Grammar and punctuation is good. No problem there, but because of the length, I didn't get a feel of your writing style or all around quality of writing. I'm interested enough because I love Axton so effing much, so I'll prolly watch this. But aim for at LEAST 1k words per chapter because your author's notes felt longer than the chapter itself.

Again, good so far. Please take my advice in stride. I honestly want more of this, normally I just don't review at all.

Hope you update soon!