Nice story. Just a few things I noticed. You spelled mum like mom a few chapters back. Also, you use the phrase "Sounds like a plan" too much.

Loved the Quidditch match, it was great :) I also liked that Snape headed off Malfoy, that was perfect :). I was also curious about what you're planning for Ginny? I'm not complaining, I like how you've written Brianna's character, in just curious :)

That is pretty stupid it is not that easy for the death eaters to find someone especially in the muggle world.

Really great, well written story! Haven't been able to put it down for the past 2 days. I really like Brianna's character and the whole dueling tournament. And please tell me you have some suitably horrible fate planned for both Malfoys! Theyre both due for serious bad karma... My only complaint with the story is that it's bit much for Harry to suddenly be so proficient as he's learning lot of new magic/languages, and even with occlumancy and the Room it just feels too unrealistic. otherwise I'm loving the story and can't wait to read more :)

Great chapter.
I liked Hermione's conversation with Brianna and the Quidditch match (I was worried Malfoy/Smith could try something while everybody are distracted).

Hi again. I realise that it probably seems strange to you that I've just reviewed about 6 chapters of your story at once, but I just wanted to explain myself.

I've been following your story for a while (and enjoying it!) and I noticed how close you were to 1000 reviews. As a writer on here myself, I know what a big achievement that is, and since I think you deserve it, I thought I'd help you get over that mark. I love your story, your writing and your characters, and I wish you all the best for the rest of your tale :)

I think you were right to have Remus stop the confrontation - it seems perfectly in character to me, so well done!

Just wanted to say that I love that your Harry is following in the footsteps of his father by helping Remus with his transformations. It's another thing that I wish the characters had been given a chance to do in the actual books. Nice job!

I love that Harry is Sirius' main priority! It's exactly the sort of relationship the two of them should have had in the books, so I for one am glad you're righting that wrong! Well done :)

I thought you did a great job with the Tournament overall, and you're also doing brilliant job building excitement! You're keeping me intrigued so well done!

Really liked the end to this chapter. Sirius and Harry are both really in character (which is a great achievement in an AU story) and it makes scenes like this even better for us readers. Well done!

Long chapter but loved it :)

It's not bad, but... too much sizzle, not enough steak.

Hello,
I have to say I am super impressed with this story. It is imaginative, original, and yet includes some of my favortie, and slightly over used, plot points, but in a new way. You are also, the very first author I have found to do a well-written and BELIEVABLE OFC romantic character for Harry. I usually read slash or general stories as I haven't found a ship I actually like outside of those, so kudos and thanks so much for the enjoyable read. I look forward to more with desperate anticipation!
Pernicia

Awwwww... Yippee!