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| Reviews for Dark Dawn |
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   PlatinumOwl 3/15/13 . chapter 3Oh my. |
| BluffCity 1/25/13 . chapter 3 heyy bro. when you gonna update? still waiting heh. Im ASIS dude btw (; |
| A Persnickety Haberdashery 1/5/13 . chapter 3 Right, so this needs to be edited/reviewed: the ending for this chapter appears to have been cut off in the middle of a sentence... |
| rebel lion75 12/10/12 . chapter 3 man!, this really good please continue :D i really want to see the other 4's reactions to alex |
| iFicti0n 12/4/12 . chapter 3 I like it. Update soon. :D |
| Blond Dude 42 12/5/12 . chapter 3 Great story so far. original ideas make good stories and this is an original idea. You made a small error in this chapter. You said M16 but it is supposed to be MI6. Commen mistake. |
