 WyldeHorse 8/11/02 . chapter 3Well, yea, it makes sense that Naru would have figured it out, although I think that she probably would only have started thinking about it after she started hating the girls. After all, have we not all heard the saying, 'know your enemies better than you know your friends'? And do those girls not fall under that catagory, since Naru is activly hating their guts for whatever happend to her? You need to clear that up. What the hell did they _do_ to Naru, anyway? |
 Chibi Shamps 8/10/02 . chapter 3You updated!
Are you going to have more SM bashing? Currently I'm writing a fic about them but that doesn't mean I like the show. Their speeches are so corny! Anyway, I like the chapter. More please! |
 Romilly McAran 8/10/02 . chapter 3 Hmm... new senshi... who? well, could only be Ranko (well, sometimes he is a girl) and Naru. But if that helps the senshi? I think not! Do you really hate the senshi that much? I like the innocent little Bunny! Nevertheless that is going to be fun! I want more Schu though! What have the senshi done to Naru now? Can you keep the senshi alive, I mean play as much as you want with them, but keep them alive! After all they all want only to help and have often rescued the world!
But I like Schwarz, Naru and Ranma at the moment much more! Write more! |
 Romilly McAram 8/10/02 . chapter 3 Hmm... new senshi... who? well, could only be Ranko (well, sometimes he is a girl) and Naru. But if that helps the senshi? I think not! Do you really hate the senshi that much? I like the innocent little Bunny! Nevertheless that is going to be fun! I want more Schu though! What have the senshi done to Naru now? Can you keep the senshi alive, I mean play as much as you want with them, but keep them alive! After all they all want only to help and have often rescued the world!
But I like Schwarz, Naru and Ranma at the moment much more! Write more! |
 Romilly McAram 8/10/02 . chapter 3 Hmm... new senshi... who? well, could only be Ranko (well, sometimes he is a girl) and Naru. But if that helps the senshi? I think not! Do you really hate the senshi that much? I like the innocent little Bunny! Nevertheless that is going to be fun! I want more Schu though! What have the senshi done to Naru now? Can you keep the senshi alive, I mean play as much as you want with them, but keep them alive! After all they all want only to help and have often rescued the world!
But I like Schwarz, Naru and Ranma at the moment much more! Write more! |
 Chibi Shamps 8/7/02 . chapter 2HI!
I updated my story! _ No cliffhanger this time.
I love the sequel of 'False Identity'. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon! |
 Adyen 8/6/02 . chapter 2::blinkblink::
Naru-chan? USAGI-CHAN? ##$%?
WHAT?
Heh. This is sounding more and more interesting...
Oh, btw, I think you should stick with 'True Identity' as the name. It fits after the 'False Identity'. |
 Krypt 8/4/02 . chapter 2 Nice chap. Next one coming up soon? Maybe with an explanation on WHY Schuldig's so angry? It couldn't possibly be something Usagi did, I mean, she's too naive to be malicious enough to hurt Rache/Naru THAT much.
You've left a lotta hints and I want them answered! |
 Krypt 7/29/02 . chapter 1 Nice insight to the whole thing. Except I was a bit confused at the start, but that's all cleared up now. MORE! MORE! (SCHUKEN! SCHUKEN! A somewhat unpopular pairing, but somehow you've made it irrisistable!) |
 Danyella Skyler Silverfire 7/27/02 . chapter 1love this series. I can't wait for more. |