i like the title of this story
and the story itself is pretty funny!

this story was CRAZY - and i loved every line of it XD it was hilariously funny. thanks for writing it. keep writing.

omg! u just cant help loving Dumbledore! gosh that was purre GOLD!

[previously reveiwed the whole thing anonymously as 'Kia' because I'm just that lazy and didn't want to log in!! lol]

Anyway, I LOVED IT. Poor Seamus <3 we love him though. Maybe he can get someone else...or a lot of someone-elses ;}

I actually like the idea of Harry and Seamus. Either way it goes, I'm good with the end :]

:O sex after like three weeks!! That's naughty behaviour. Tisk tisk, teenage boys for you I guess..

xD I love Seamus

:\ i'm not sure if HP would be /that/ innocent about looking great, but oh well

LOL loved this chapter x]

When changing POV's in a chap, I suggest a page break--one of those long lines that split the page better. :] however the story is getting interesting. Loved Snape's comment on Dumbly--same as Draco's xD

Also, Sirius' words on if Harry was hawt before they met it would be awkward--that one made me laugh :p

:] I still suggest itallics instead of *asterisks*. Draco is adorable :P I think it's cool how this is telling a story without really playing the events, though soon I wanna see some actual conversations and such rather than just memories. :} we'll see though!

:O I've been looking for a good story for a while now, and it looks as though I've found exactly what I needed!! Word of advice though, watch capitalization when you start new sentences, also in the beginning some of the sentences are very short and choppy, causing it to flow not as well as it could. One last thing, the *asterisks* around lots of the words are confusing--just use itallics, it works much better and makes things look neater.

You may have fixed these things in other chapters, though :] I shall read on!!

I was re-reading this for the fourth time, and suddenly realised that I didn't think I'd ever submitted a review. Oops. So I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this fic, especially the different POVs you used XD

That was SO sweet! I loved how you portrayed Harry!

i laughed so much my stomach hurts :)
wonderful ideas, hillarious characters. shame about seamus. i certainly didn't hate him, i adored him, poor pup :)

and the beautiful harry potter is stuck in my head

i never stopped smiling. thanks for writing this.