|Reviews for Spoken|
| Guest 5/13/13 . chapter 9
PLEEEEASE update soon! I love it!
| shadowgrl94 5/13/13 . chapter 9
I lost my hearing a few years ago. I learnt to read lips but i couldnt help but feel self conscience about my voice. Sign language helped me loads and I love that Harry is using it in this story.
| Bananas-ofthe-WorldUNITE 5/12/13 . chapter 9
| esinger 4/15/13 . chapter 9
Amazing! Love the story and see you at the next chapter!
| Sbinkley17 4/14/13 . chapter 9
Loving this story please update soon 3
| Aishiteru-anata 4/10/13 . chapter 7
OMG, I absolutely love your story and when I realised that it's not an abandon one like some others, I was so happy because I know I really enjoyed you characterising Harry and Draco and whenever I read your story, I'd feel: 'This is why I love Drarry so much and I'd never stop loving SLASH'. Thanks for your story. And about the extensive Drarry playlist, can you message the list to me? I'd love to hear it. Thank you!
| Blaisy Baby 4/8/13 . chapter 9
This is an excellent chapter, Hun. Can't wait for the next one, like, really.
| HornyCorny 4/7/13 . chapter 9
Ha...Haha! Well if it isn't a bludger. Our nice old pal waiting for a time to shine. And it was a nice obstacle too! Malfoy saved him...again OuO Although this time he didn't get hit and had to suffer through a whole lot of oshits. But they've come in a different form here, huh? They're like alternate universes. Oh woawoa different universes with connection to another are usually so confusingly good. You're the connection. I actually do view Bludger and Spoken as different universes tied together haha, don't know what is getting typed, it's the fingers I tell you. The bludger link is like a good, sweet paradox that had me chuckling about it-the sort of chuckling where you slap your knee like the old folk. I'm joking, who even does that anymore? You really 'do' have every character's every characteristic and presence pinned down to a T. Whatever that means. No, I really, god, everyone is so in-character, I'm not sure if you can see this: maybe it comes off your fingers subconsciously? You ought to know though, spot ON characters amazing beautiful great wow. My fingers were shaking by the time I was through, no one knows yeah? Godamned lousy fingers good for nothing except writing shitty headcanons. THIS ISN'T THE MATTER (hopy shit I accidentally hovered the cursor over 'Post Review as HornyCorny' and had a heart attack. This is only the ninth line, come on. Well this is weird, it auto-correct my nineth into ninth, godamn I was so sure it was nineth) It's so cute, out of this world adorable, blissfully sweet cute adorable, squeal-worthy that Draco rendered his mood entirely visible to anyone who is not Potter and not Gryffindor (except Ginny, but you know) The feels...I didn't think I'd ever say "the feels" and have it serious. Draco in first-stage jealousy with Ginny. Very classic and heart-warming at the same time. Though Draco and his Slytherin peers...OTL you knOW HOW IT FEELS, RIGHT? Moments with Draco and Blaise. Although it's down to just a friendship, a cute, tight one. I loved the fact that Zabini made Draco feel a tiny bit better. Well the state afterwards was better than before. The swearfest was like, what I exist for. The only reason I was created. lol. It made me laugh. A lot. Out loud. That's very rare, but judging from the emotions I gain from your chapters, you , probably think me some moody, problem child, I'm not. -fidgets- xD Draco's snaps are downright adorable, Nott's attempts are embarrassingly lovely and Slytherin profanities are just as good. So well done! Spoken really is beautiful-you made it beautiful with your beauty. One of these days I'm going to print out Spoken, and Bludger, and some of your precious one-shots, hole them thoughtfully at the side, connect them with a binder and die with it. Shame how you can't use bold writing in reviews, really, I'd be bolding up all my woohoos. Most fanfic authors and some actual authors don't include possible, actual emotions that readers would think the characters should encounter, but you, you do. Reactions, anger, their sudden solemnity...Draco's fussy act, his frustration, -Harry's- frustration and confusion and his friends' care, it's all so realistic. It seems so real. That's just one of your talents. Most of us are real tired about crack over dramatics once in a while. We need a long, realistic break. Good thing Spoken is long and realistic (: Oh yeah, I almost forgot that Hermione and Ron didn't know Harry's ability to use sign language.
I know it's anything but a highlight compared to most scenes in this chapter, but my absolute FaVorItE part was Harry's training session with ms. Nymphadora T. Oh my god my face is heating up from the sheer beauty of it all! I need to hold the ground with my knees. Ok, all jokes and bull-shit aside, it was magical and it was legit. Harry channeling all his anger and confusion he receives from parting with Draco and with encouragement leads it down his fingertips to his wand. Hey, explosions are fine, because you exploded my heart. Wait, that was a bull-shit joke. You don't know how many emotions you pull out of me. Can you imagine two figures, one kneeling the other just pulling persons out of that one person? Yeaaaaaaahhh. You deserve fame, you deserve an actual spot-light, my friend.
I wanted to kiss him, Harry wrote without thinking.
I...uh...omg. Well you seem like you never think, do you Harry? Or you're at your max when you don't think. Oh hell, hold me up, I'm going to fall. OF COURSE WE WANTED TO KISS HIM AUGH I can't contain, I don't care how many times I've praised you it's all for the right cause. You are amazing. Your writing is delectable. Your inner person is beautiful. I will love you forever.
| joymullen 4/7/13 . chapter 9
sooo good harrys funny
| MirrorFlower and DarkWind 4/7/13 . chapter 9
oh wow poor souls and harry its draco always always always haha i loved it great job
| delia cerrano 4/7/13 . chapter 9
I hate Harry & Draco separated! It sounds like Ginny is going to be getting involved ...oh nooo.
Please get them back together and please please please don't let them get further apart or let anyone start an affair or dating them. I'm crying in a corner over here. They complete each other so
| GaloRoots 4/7/13 . chapter 9
You are perfectly perfect. And yay! Glad someone noticed the ASL. Well not so much A but SL. Lol. Can't wait for chapter ten.
| luna lovegood 2000 4/7/13 . chapter 9
This is great please continue.
| dracoginnyscorpiuswood 4/7/13 . chapter 9
You're really giving me major harry feels man, he just so adorable! I can't even. Really he is just so cute! And then the whole thing about them realizing they like each other but not really is just adorable! I love it! Please update soon, I can't wait!
| Those Who Can't Write Read 4/3/13 . chapter 4
Ok, just curious. I don't know if it's just that people don't sign like that where I'm from, but why does Harry sign into Draco's hand? Can't he just sign into the air and let Draco see the sign and not feel it. I mean, I'm pretty sure people signed into Hellen Keller's hands but that was because she was blind too.