Oh, wow. THE Lightning Farron just turned into a pile of emotional mush 'cause Caius held her hand...LOL! Cannot wait for the next chapter, my friend!

0yF

3 3 3 !

Poor Miyoki. Sad fate.

OMIGOD! He's a Guardian now! And Lightning's growing to looooooove him :P
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep 'em coming!

0yF

there are not enough fanfictions like this! keep up the great work :)

Ah, there's not a moment that goes by that I don't enjoy the dynamics of Lightning and Caius. The moments I will particularly call out as special are those moments when Caius had an uncharacteristic silence. One during his shock and another during his confrontation with Lightning near Yeul's place. One could only imagine what thoughts and curiosities he may have going on in that little head of his, particularly Lightning-related. Honestly paints him in an even sweeter light. I can't really think of any note-worthy negatives in the chapter other than the awkwardness of Lightning and Caius's confrontation in which they both place their hands on each other's shoulders. I've done it several times with my brother, but it doesn't seem like a natural gesture. Maybe to some, but it appears awkward with their abundantly unequal heights. Otherwise it was a wonderful chapter, chocked full with forebodings from the lovely seeress. I can't wait for when they truly do come to fruition.

Ha, Lightning's beginning to really fall for Caius, isn't she? Can't wait to see what happens next with this.
I love your work. It's professional and you're at the stage of writing that I want to be at someday. The only reason I write is because it's a beautiful outlet when things get stressful, and when I read what you write, it really inspires me to keep going, do better. I guess what I'm trying to say is: thanks for updating your story so others like me can improve on theirs.
See you next update! :D

0yF

Loved the new chapter! Looks like people are starting to notice the friendliness between Lightning and Caius.

Can't wait for the next one!

As great as usual !

Exciting times!

I was wondering there for a bit why Lightning wasn't using magic. I'm surprised she isn't a L'Cie or Etro's Champion anymore since she keeps talking about her focus.

I love this fanfiction! I don't think there are many unanswered questions at all. Can't wait for the next chapter!

P.S. I noticed in FFXIII-2 that the sheep don't bleat, they moo... weird...

Amazing writer! Ever chapter I read I can easily ikmagine a movie of the cut scenes. Outstanding lightning/caius pair which I must say I'm really likikng thus far...thanx so muchn for contiuing:-)

I'd say this is my favorite chapter too. Kinda feels like the story takes a big turn from this point on haha.

I'm still here and I can't wait to read your next chapter ! In this one you said too much but not enough. I want to know what will happen in the next one between Lightning and Caius !

See you next week I hope :)