FECKING AWESOME DUDE!

Fecking awesome!

HOLY SHIT, sorry, but I had to read this one twice. Amazing job! There was so much detail and the story line, just wow. I mean it could have happened that way. I would love to this expanded to a multi chapter fic. You seem to understand the deep and murky world as it is in the Fever series very well. I have always wished for someone to do a “Fever for Dummies” so I wouldn’t have to go back and read a passage twice to get it to click. Sooooo if you ever do a tutorial, send me a note. I will be the first to sign up for your class. LOL

This was such a great fic! I love the Fever series, but have not found many fics that capture KMM's characters! Yours does! :) -k

I just finished reading Iced and was totally looking for something to help me get over the awful cliffy at the end, and dude, you're story was a-m-a-z-I-n-g. I no longer feel weird about the whole Dani/Ryodan thing anymore. Gah! x3 It was so awesome! :)

Oh, Anna, once again you have have created a masterpiece! I can't decide which I'm more thrilled about: the 2nd person narrative - original, intriguing, and best of all, CONSISTENT - or perhaps the subtle plot (Dancer, oh, Dancer), or the maybe the blessedly cannon Ryo/Dani... I do love me my daily allotment of Ryo/Dani. ) You nailed their personalities, gave Lor his proper time, and twisted me around your little finger in the process; thank you, thank you, thank you!

No, but seriously. What the heck, Dancer.

Amazing! One of the best Dani fics I've seen. Love the way you ended it.

That was awesome. Loved it!

I don't know how else to put this but: Thank was feckin' amazing! I completely /loved/ how you used the same lines over again for emphasis. I loved how you alluded to other things like Red Riding Hood, and how you kept all of the characters /in/ character. All in all, this was an amazing piece.

This is great! Can you write a Mac/Barons story set after Shaddowfever?