SO GOOD! I am shocked there are so few MGS stories and yours is FANTASTIC. Love the pacing, imagery is great, the quotes fit very nicely and the grammar is just as solid...and I just love the whole thing! Great work!

Kudos!
-K

Wait a moment. Red hair? Russian descent? NOOOOO! They got Black Widow! Quick, send Clint Barton in there!

WHY THE HELL IS THIS NOT CANON?!

ME GUSTA... even though I don't play Metal Gear Solid. Can't wait to eead more! Sorry about the whole PM situation. :(