Quiet and contemplative. Very nice.

This is beautiful!

I liked it very much!

I rode for six years and you capture the beauty of riding in freshly fallen snow so well. I love the end...they will both be just fine :) Well written

Loved this story. It sounds exacttly how I picture Aragorn to be!

I enjoyed this, the whole sensation of capturing one tranquil moment in the life of someone who has had many many adventurous experiences and such. V good :).

Mage

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I really just had to come back and review this piece because I think it is such a wonderful vignette. I'm pretty sure I tried to reveiw it before, but I believe it got booted during earlier difficulties. This was so lovely, and anyone who has ridden horses, especially in the winter can relate. It's been a long time since I've had that opportunity and I just felt like I was there when I read your words. So nice for a hot summer day.

Very well done! Sweet and poignant.

G. R.

very cute. i've had rides like this on a horse that shows up in a few stories of my own, Crysto. although, not quite like Roheryn, Crysto is a little more slow moving in his older age; not to mention he's not elvish. great story, good writting! write more! :-D

I really liked your story! It's very well written. Please write more like that! And maybe a little longer?

A nice short little piece. I really enjoy things like this, just a moment in the life of one character. I love Aragorn and this is good characterization here. Nice writing too, you should definitely write more stories.

Well, I don't normally read fanfic. Occasionally I do, when recommended a piece by someone; even more occasionally I'm glad I did - there's not much more I can say, but that this was such an occasion.

Pieces like this will get me reading fanfic regularly yet, you know ;-)

It's more of a painting-by-words (as you said on your own site) and I think it's very beautiful.

Hi Arwen,

It's a beautiful story, one which really does seem to flow well. A good little vignette.

Unfortunately, I can't really comment about the accuracy of the situations (as you know, I'm in .au, and snow is something of a rarity here... fortunately), but the picture you paint is a gorgeous one. I can almost see it in my mind - the horse, the rider, the deer in the forest, the gently drifting snow.

As I say, it's beautiful. More please! (but don't neglect "To Deliver" for this one, okay?)

Meg

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Nice little Aragorn vignette. I'm always on the lookout for a cute Aragorn-Arwen piece. If you wanted to expand it a little, you could write a chapter from Arwen's point of view. If not, this stands nicely on its own. Good job.

I love this kind of writting. I think it gives the characters of fiction and fanfiction alike a 3 dimensional feeling that you cannot recieve with a longer piece. I'm honored to be your first reviewer.