Great chapter! And I don't blame you for wanting to continue it; I blame you for stopping. ;)
I love your characters. They're so very real, I feel like I could just reach out and pull them off the page. Screen. Whatever. But really- middle of a crisis, and Adriane's drawing, Emily's worried about her test, and Kara's filing her nails. I laughed, and yet still felt the underlying tension of the situation. And I don't blame Adriane's sailor mouth- we've all got a right to have one at some point or another.
Can't wait for you to reveal the true plot of the story!

Another awesome chapter my dear friend! I really want to see how this all turns out!

I like it! (: I'm guessing Adriane will meet Zach in the next chapter? I personally like Emily and Marlin's pairing best, so I can't wait until you incorporate that into your story. Looking forward to your next update! :3

wow. Sounds exciting. can't wait.

omgomgomgomg i am so loving it right now. i think i have a prediction of who it is ; )!

More. More. More.

Yay! Update! I really love where your going with this. However, the pace seems a little choppy ( perhaps it's only me? ), but other then that, this is really good!

I love this story! Please add another chapter! :D

I'm following this story! :D It's great so far, and I look forward to your next update. :3

Epic.

I love it so far! Keep updating!

You never cease to amaze me with your different takes on my favorite book series! Can't see what happens next :) update soon :)

i love this keep writeing

I think its a great ending. That has always been their number one rule: one jumps, we all jump.

Can't wait to see what happens. Love Avalon and the girls. Hope to read more soon.