Beautiful! Wish I were there!

Interesting treatment. Almost like a screenplay!

You make them both so adorable! (albeit, immature)

Good start... I think I've done this story?

Wow firs I fail at checking for new Stuff so I didn't know about this till 4 days ago, but yeah for new stuff. But um, when did you get skype?

Cute! I like it! :D

Beautiful story!

Awwww...that was a great ending!

LOL...your own private cell...don't worry, you'll be out come the first warm day!

NOOOOOO! I will not let you go back to school! *clings onto your leg* I-I... Fine... You can go to your stupid school... *grumbles reluctantly*

Well, this was wonderful, as per usual! I loved the guide you included about how to take care of a sugar-high phantom. 'Twas wonderful.

I'm sorry this is not as long as the others. I'm just exhausted and don't have much to say, right now.

Please post soon! And include another chapter. I mean, include another chapter before the end one that is inevitably approaching. And encroaching... STAY AWAY FROM ME! *crosses her fingers as if she were warding off a vampire*

A very abrupt, non-sequitur review by yours truly,

VW

LOL...awesome...she faints...now he'll have an even bigger ego.

Awww, very sweet on Christmas morning.

Another great chapter, very touching.

Another awesome chapter. Loved the trip to the mall and the wrapping paper mummy...ROFL.

Give me an address I can send you a dozen men's handkerchiefs.
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Gah! Sorry it took me so long to review! I've kind of been caught up with my online financial literacy class... Boo... What a bore... Anyway, I'm finally here to review, so that is what I shall do! Hah... That rhymes...

This was pretty much one of the greatest things I've read in a long time, but perhaps that is just due to the fact that every author I have subscribed to, thus far, has not published, or updated, a single story in quite some time. Though I suppose it's karma because neither have I... I've been meaning to! Honest! But... Well... Darned life has been getting in the way. OR, as I'll continue my idea from above, it's just because you're pretty hilarious. I'll concede with myself and say it's a mixture of both. I don't want to get into another argument with myself... I nearly lost the last one, and I don't think I could bear the shame of losing this time!

By the bye, I've decided to re-do *italicize* Back to the Beginning *italicize*. I've actually just posted the first chapter recently, though you've probably already seen it. I would beg you to read it, as I have only one reviewer now, and as you would be the first person whom has read the original that could also read the revised. I would appreciate it muchly! But if you find yourself too busy, I would implore you to not bother.

Now, for the actual reviewing part... I really loved the part where you actually typed out Erik's congested dialogue, instead of just implying it. As in, you actually typed what he would have sounded like. I really like it when people do it, though sometimes I try not to pull it off because the story I am writing is too sophisticated for silly half-attempts at accents and whatnot. And because I haven't actually had any sick characters in any of my stories yet... Well... Never mind.

Please update soon! And if I do not review right away, do not take it personally. I'll get to it eventually. And, rest assured, I'll be the first reader, even if I don't appear the first reviewer.

In highest regards,

VW