Story is getting interesting. Carry on. I think there is going to be trouble along the way

I love this story and you shouldn't have to justify or apologize for writing the plot/twist that you did - it's *your* story! More power to you, I say. Don't listen to the negativity - just keep doing what you do :)

HOW MUCH DO YOU WANT TO BET THE PERSON NAOMI CHEATED WITH IS GOING TO BE THERE ?! AWKWARD.

Dude, I've been loving both of your new stories but I just read your authors note, I can't believe some people are being so ridiculous. It's a story, these characters do not exist, I forgot how crazy some fans can be, like they actually believe this stuff is happening. I'd personally like to say that with everything Naomi is going through, it's believable that she cheated, actually I think by adding that in that you've made this story better instead of dancing around the ugliness just to have constant happy dappy naomily. Everyone should know that real life doesn't work like that. So I wouldn't worry about what people say, they shouldnt be so childish and they also know that even if Emily finds out, they'll work it out no matter how long it takes. So don't quit this story, haters are gonna hate, but I quite frankly am looking forward to the next chapter as I'm sure plenty of others are too. Keep up the good work as well as your chin bud. :)

I pray to god that Emily does not take her back! Stay with jj he's better for her! I hope Naomi rots in hell that stupid whore. Hahah omg srry! I will not cuntinue the story knowing that Naomi cheated.

Please, please keep writing :)

Cant continue reading the story, i hate stories where people cheat

Oh goodness.. Oooooooohhhh goodness xD I freakin love Tasha, she's such a little brat. Cool chapter and now the story begins ;)

Dont have Naomi cheat! I hate Cheaters

Omg I love this story. And of *course* it inevitably ended (as in I caught up with your updates :p ) - now I have to wait! Pleeeease update soon - I can't wait to read more. Please Jesus don't let Naomi eff things up lol.

Ok i know this is messed up but..if u have naomi cheat please make them interesting or some what atractive. I mean sofia just. No.
I suggest tea(from u.s skins)

I hope you dont have naomi cheat on emily when she goes on the open day like they have her do on the show. i want naomi to be more spportive

I've always loved your writing and the new turn you've taken with Emily and JJ from the Love Ball surprised no one thought of it sooner! Looking forward to seeing where you take this one :)

Happy new year to you too :)

This chap was really interesting, keep it up!
want more of this! ;)

Interesting! I wanna know how they deal with this. Will Naomi accept Emily.. oh my, I just love Emily she's so sweet! Please make Naomi do some effort I don't wanna see 'em apart.