Please update soon!

Thanks for the update. Interesting development. I'm very relieved that you didn't have Charlie kidnapped! That's been done so many times that it's trite and boring. A drive by was much better!

That wasn't good.

Interesting chapter , but can't imagine anything between Don and Terry not even a spark , they're too old . But it's still going to be nice to see Terry again

You're bringing Terry back? Interesting. Still not sure where this is all headed, but it's fun. Thanks.

Terry...isn't that his first partner from season 1? And she was replaced by Megan?

Great Chapter the murder of Terry Lake's sister is bring her back to LA. Please continue.

Wow. This is a very interesting story.

Thanks for the update. Considering who Don is, the police might decide not to press charges, especially since Rachel wasn't driving. But if it was my kid who did this? That cell phone would be the first thing to go. The laptop would be only used for school, with a parent present. Yeah, that's rough, but it would get the average teen's attention like nothing else.

I loved this chapter. I loved how Rachel was picked up by Don and her father. I loved how Both Amita and Charlie were filled with so much doubt. Please continue.

Interesting contrast between the two sets of brothers (Phil and Sterling vs Don and Charlie). Still not sure exactly what's going on here, but that's part of the fun. Thanks for posting.

Please update soon! I luv this story!

Interesting Chapter. I loved how the younger brother is getting more nervous about the plan his older brother has so much he calls his girlfriend to tell her he loved her. Please continue.

Please update soon!

Please update soon!