"i like soup" ha i luv it continue even tho im kinda late in getting to the fandom.

Yes, please continue!! I love these kind of stories!!

omg, please update! xD lol, I just can't picture Az as a girl... ^^; but it's still hilarious!

YOU NEED TO POST MORE

'"I like soup."' *dies laughing* That was awesome. I'm not so sure about Azrael being a chick. He's too sexy as a guy...Anways.

I loved it! It was really funny, and I was laughing really loud...recieving strange looks from my relatives.

MORE, PLEASE!

Oh, that was terribly amusing :)

Good work!

I liked this one, you have to write more!! I've only read one of your other stories, In The Darkness, but I really liked it. You really need to write more... please?

Of course. The last one in the series, which means that this is the first one I come across... Oh, well. It was good! I'd read it if you continued it.

LOL! ^_~ What fun, I loved it! SEE YA
-Deity

Fabulous! I would *love* to read a sequel!

Quirky is right. I like this one! A sequel would be nice though...

Hmm.. cute story! Can't see loki wearing sketchers though :/

Critically speaking, the sex scene was sorta not real subtle... not really the way the characters would react to those two having sex I don't think. Anyway, that's just my opinion... who really cares about plot anyway?

Soup is good.

*grins* poor Azzy ... and good thing Bartleby didn't shoot, or I might have screamed in rage and thus making my parents notice I'm still online at midnight.

Bartleby found his voice. "I like soup."

this was THE best. ::rolls:: food and sex, ah yes, if only life really were so simple... though it seems they are about to find out it *isn't*. ::chuckles:: you made him a chick...a teenage chick at that!! oh, how grand...

That was unnaturally hilarious for a fanfic. I definately like the idea of Azreal having to be a fourteen-year-old girl. Perhaps "She" should give Loki and Bartleby another chance in heaven, especially if neither of them tries to screw Azreal. Just one question--how could Loki and Bartleby have sex? They weren't actually humans. Or did "She" turn them into humans?