Reviews for Pegaro's Adventure

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Bworms1980 2008-09-21 ch 5,	abuseI love this entire fanfic, but I just can't get pass: "Her half-senile father was with her, cat on his shoulder and all" That line had me giggling for a long while. I would say that Bulma's father is insane, but so are most of the DBZ characters. Thanks for a great fanfic.
RedRoseGrave 2005-01-12 ch 7,	abuseLOVE IT! plz update, and have more G/V! I LOVE IT!
Usagi1313 2004-05-08 ch 7, anon.	abuseI really enjoy this story and hope you continue it soon.
dragon_game 2004-04-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseGood story. Please try to continue this story.
zs-Adun 2003-12-29 ch 7, anon.	abusePLEASE GET ANOTHER CHAPTER UP. NEED HELP MAKE THE NEW ALIENS TALK ABOUT RUNNING INTO BABADI IN SPACE. AND WARN THEM ALL OR EVEN PUT YOURSELF INTO THE STORY THIS IS GOOD DON'T LEAVE US HANGINS
gaul1 2003-12-05 ch 7,	abusenice work, keep up the good work, byes
gaul1 2003-12-05 ch 6,	abusegood stroy keep up the good work, byes
Chrysoberyl 2003-08-30 ch 7,	abuseCool. I liked that chapter Can you update again soon? Please?
EternalBlizzardOfSwords66 2003-06-27 ch 1,	abuseyo, SuperFreakSayian here. Good first chapter. You should try to make a story with the main character having a history of your backround, or somewhat similar to it at least. Personallity counts as well. Pegaros is a cool character. Read New World Sayians, part one of a trilogy. See ya
Nick Johnson 2003-06-20 ch 3, anon.	abuseFirst off, I want to say thank you for answering the questions I have given you so far. They are sure helping me to understand some things that are going on in this fanfic so far. So now, here are five more questions for you to answer. But since you haven't answered the email I sent you, I will try sending them to you through this review. 1. How come Gohan even introduced all his friends & everyone he knew to Pegaro? 2. By the way who all did they see? Why? 3. I'm curious, what were all of Gohan's friends & family doing when when Gohan brought Pegaro to meet them? Why? 4. What all would happen when Pegaro came to dinner? 5. How did Chichi, Gohan, and/or Goten know about Vegeta, Bulma, & Trunks coming over for dinner as well? Be sure to let me know. I will have more questions for you to answer later.
JoSav 2003-05-06 ch 4,	abuseI liked this. But maybe a little more of a personal touch, like inner conversation (how does Gohan really feel about all this, for instance) would've made it more interesting to read. It would've given it a bit more flavour. Although I liked Videl defending him. does a little squeal Hehe. Nice. The story actually isn't as fragmented as it seemed at first. :)
JoSav 2003-05-01 ch 1,	abuseInteresting prologue (if that's what it is) I usually don't like reading present tense but I rather enjoyed this one. Amnot in a very constructive critisism type-o-mood but perhaps when I read more.
The Smooster 2003-04-21 ch 7,	abuseThis chapter had a lot more Grammer errors than previous chapters did. But other then that it was good. Videl was rather a-typically non-nosy for some reason... she must have something planned. Smoo
The Smooster 2003-04-21 ch 6,	abuseOh wow... Gohan is in for it. VERY in for it... he is going to have SOO much fun explaining that one... must read more.
The Smooster 2003-04-21 ch 5,	abuse... Videl is never going to leave him alone now... he he he he I liked this chapter. Gohan told a lot without really saying that much. And only Videl really understood just how much he did say. ... goes to next chapter now... :D The Smooster

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