|Reviews for HP: Dolen Amser|
| Guest 5/10/13 . chapter 7
Really enjoying the story, yeh there is OC and whatever, but it's your story! Can't wait for the rest. Have to be voting for A) Keep it as Honks! Well done and thanks for writing. :)
| silversnitch4765 5/8/13 . chapter 7
My thoughts on the issue is that it was extremely odd for this to happen to harry, what are the chances there would be an accident that would send hermione to the exact time frame as Harry. It would be kind of ridiculous in my opinion. My vote goes to just honks!
| Quincey Forder-Denis De Plaen 5/6/13 . chapter 1
A cage, birds and time travels...
*glares at the Luteces*
You just couldn't help yourselves, could you?!
All Bioshock Infinite joking aside, great start of a fic!
| george17 5/3/13 . chapter 5
In the first chapter I'm not sure there is really any point to a time travel fic if you have to swear a magical oath not to try to change the past? Still while I suspected this was just going to be an endless retelling of canon from a different pov I skimmed ahead on the chance that the fic had some really creative workaround.
In any case this chapter made absolutely no sense. How is Harry telling Tonks everything in detail that happens not making changes to the past? Why doesn't he lose his magic right there? Her guessing he is Harry doesn't mean he is not changing things dramatically by giving her the details of the future. The only argument is well he really told her previously anyway. If that's the argument then you could use that to do anything and say well he really already did this. Then it would probably just degenerate into the author playing games and changing things as he chooses which really makes the whole vow thing not only meaningless but annoying. So, needless to say I gave up here. The writing is decent for most fics and the idea seems like it could have been fun but for me at least the problems are too annoying to ignore.
| Dragona 2007 5/3/13 . chapter 7
Honestly, option C) is the most interesting one, but justifying a process that takes years to learn and hone, even if Hermione is given ANOTHER time turner to use to achieve it, will be difficult.
However duplicating the story with Hermione (option B) ) added into the same line of thought as Harry would ruin the premise of your fic. One exchange student that excels is odd and JUST quirky enough to be accepted by the wizarding community, two is downright suspicious.
I'd stick with A) or dare and try with C) (especially with the idea of Hermione convincing the DoM to give her younger self a time turner after possibly being forced to admit misusing at Dumbledore's suggestion in PoA)
| SpaceHead3 5/3/13 . chapter 7
Hatred. It is super unlikely I believe and really just shatters suspension of disbelief.
| guestreader 5/2/13 . chapter 7
making two stories is a possibility. one honks and one with the three of them. so we get another story to read ;)
but how about this:
- older harry and tonks
- younger harry and hermione
| cah11 5/1/13 . chapter 7
Personally i would prefer you keep this as a Honks only, the type of personality you have given Tonks in this story doesn't really lend credence to the idea that she would be ok with sharing. That's just my opinion though.
| thanelaesser 5/1/13 . chapter 7
i would like the option tht you plave the three of them in the DoM with the cover story that lines up wth cannon. sounds like an interesting story to me.
| Eternal Blizzard 4/30/13 . chapter 7
dude, you have an excellent story going, please don't ruin it by making it anything other than honks. With harry and tonks both being metamorphmagus, hermione just won't fit in. If u are adamant about making it a triad, i believe fleur would fit better since all three face similar problems due to their abilities. I know it probably means nothing, but if u make it h/hr/nt, u have already lost me as a reader.
| Anna 4/30/13 . chapter 7
I'd vote for A (keep it Honks) primarily because there are very few good Honks stories. Adding Hermione to the mix would ...dilute the relationship and make this just another story where Harry ends up with two women (who, of course, are best friends and never have any fights whatsoever).
| colmshan13 4/29/13 . chapter 7
You've got a good story going.
There's no need to make a triad- they're unnecessary in the extreme, and always ruin a story.
I never particularly care who is in dating Harry, but make it only one! Otherwise you run the risk of it just turning into a smut fic.
| soxylady27 4/28/13 . chapter 7
I really like this story. I've read the similar story which is why I passed it by the first time. I'm glad that everything is out in the open as far as who Harry is. I'm BEGGING you though, PLEASE keep this Honks. I really don't like threesome stories and will probably stop reading if you bring in Hermione.
| Hivedragon 4/28/13 . chapter 7
I say it keep it Honks.
| Crazykiller2606 4/28/13 . chapter 7
great story so far i vote for keeping this honks
but also i want to ask if you not make snape hate jim/harry for just being black because so is tonks through her mother