I loved your fanfiction, it was awesome, cute and epic! Thumbs up

Awww...cute! I loved it!

cute! I loved the link between them. For a while you had me thinking that Balthy was somehow Arthur and Dave was Merlin's reincarnation. XD Thought it would be some kind of merthur thing. lol
Beautiful nonetheless XD

This was very intense and filled with great action. I felt so bad for Balthazar, losing so much. I like how you explained the magic and how Dave saved Balthazar and then Balthazar saved him much in the same way, and how it all fit together in the end. They do make a lovely pair.

So happy to see this, I just watched the movie on TV and this story made me grin all day. :) I wish you'd write more here, maybe the Utherians come back in a few years and try to get them again? Maybe some other way.

Perfect