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  sr10 12/20/12 . chapter 3 Would love to see more of this story. Very nice job of showing intrique. I'd check for grammar errors and sequencing in some areas but love what you are writing. |
 hikeyosemite 12/21/12 . chapter 4Ack! Annie was shot?! I'm really liking this story. I like your style, transitioning from one scene to the next so quickly. |
| christmasinacup 12/20/12 . chapter 4 The part with Henry was a bit confusing... did she shoot Annie? Still a bit hard to follow, but I like where it's headed! |
| Moons88 12/20/12 . chapter 4 It's really exciting and I can't wait to read more :). I like how you switched to the "27 years ago" memories, to fill in some of the gaps. /Moons |
| Moons88 12/17/12 . chapter 3 It's more exciting that I anticipated, no offense, I just hadn't thought about how it would be if Annie were their biological daughter. But it is v. exciting and I'm looking forward to your continuation of this story. You've captured them well, the characters. /Moons :) |
| Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 3 Love it, can't wait to see what happens and would love to see a heart to heart between Annie and Arthur. |
| Guest 12/8/12 . chapter 2 Love it, please update. Brilliant story. |
| christmasinacup 12/9/12 . chapter 3 Intriguing! But I would definitely edit for grammar and such, because it's a little distracting at times. Otherwise, I like it so far! |
| Guest 12/7/12 . chapter 2 I'd love to see more, and get the back story and possibly how they deal going forward. |
| Guest 12/7/12 . chapter 1 This sounds like an interesting story line. You've got me on the hook. Let's see where you are going. :-) |
| agguielover 12/9/12 . chapter 3 Cant wait for next chapter :D |
| Abigail Sykes 12/8/12 . chapter 3 I really like this story! I don't usually review that often and I have reviewed twice for this story. You are a really good writer and I am enjoying this immensely. I am glad that you mentioned about the short chapters because I personally, no offense, find it a bit annoying. I really like the story and it is a little difficult to enjoy it as much with one update a week with less than 250 words. |
| rebecca List 12/8/12 . chapter 3 it was good |
| agguielover 12/8/12 . chapter 2 Ooo Cant wait for next chapter. Keep up the good work |
| agguielover 12/7/12 . chapter 1 OMG OMG PLEASE YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! |
