Update Update Update! Now! Or I'll get Oliver to come and tickle you!:D

great chapter, love the banner

I can't wait for the next chapter.

i liked it before the rewrite is still good but i miss the other one

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ update its really killing me not being able to know who said those words! I'm really mad cause some ppl just stop updating just when it gets good so PLZ don't like those other ppl who do that I love the story. I would love to make a story with my own ideas but I don't think anyone would like it AND... I don't know how to write and post and update. U know all the stuff -

I hope u update soon. I so want 2 know what happens next,

I think it sould be Shane. he brok free from the Founder and is going to try and kill Claire. He stakes Oliver and stabs Claire in the arm, but before Shane can do anymore damage Jason talkes him and removes the stake from Oliver. Now Oliver and Jason restrain Shane and call the founder. Oliver soon noticed Claire is slowly bleeding out. Oliver calls Thoe Goldman to help with Claire only to find out the cuts on her are s where WIDE open and bleeding out not her stab wound on her arm.

Bring on chapter 6! Can't wait xx

I think it might be Myrnin. It just sounds something like what he might say. Good chapter!

Damn who ruined the kiss?

OMG OMG OMG OMG PLEASE UPDATE!

OMG I'd totally love it if that person was myrnin lol and why doesn't Claire and the other characters do that bit in bold well you could next time... UPDATE! Thanks xx

I loved :)

loved this chapter

Awww.
That ending was so adorable:'3
Screw whoever killed their moment, no matter how cute it was:D

You need to write longer chapters Miss, I always get to the end too fast:( :D
Its wonderful, as usual:')
I wish I had thought of getting them together before the point in the first version where it happens after he finds out about her parentage, though, you may not even use that story line so I have no idea:D Hurry up with Chapter 6;D