| Reviews for Once in a Lifetime |
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Gerriv 12/14/12 . chapter 3What a tear jerker ending! Great story, thanks! |
chocolate1 12/13/12 . chapter 3I can't believe that its over. I knew everything couldn't be decided all at once but at least they are going to try and work it out. They are in love and can't escape that love or live without each other. I don't know why but everything becomes much clearer after a tragedy. Thanks for the awesome read! |
Guest 12/13/12 . chapter 3 You did us olitz shippers major Justice with this one! |
LivvieAddie 12/11/12 . chapter 2UPDATE |
Venus Maia 12/10/12 . chapter 2So good. So glad that Olivia is being assertive about her love. Hope she realizes that she has been wasting precious time away from her true love and will fight to be part of his life. Nothing like a life and death moment to put things into perspective. |
Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 2 Power of Attorney-I didn't expect that one. I'm glad that you included the other kids and they like Liv. Great story so far and looking forward to the next chapters. |
mebe1993 12/9/12 . chapter 2I'm can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon! |
chocolate1 12/9/12 . chapter 2It wasn't surprising to me that Fitz gave her POA but I understand how surprising it was the them and Mellie's reaction well it was expected. And after all that stress I also expected her to go into labor. It was great that the kids came to see their father. I believe that the combination of the voices of his kids and Liv's presence willed him to come back to them. So what happens now? America's baby is born and he loves Olivia. I doubt after such a tragic event that he wants to go back to Mellie but will Liv compel him to do so until an appropriate time whenever that is. |
Gerriv 12/9/12 . chapter 2I am loving this story! I can see this happening on the show! Please update again soon! So glad Fitz is awake! |
StillStacie 12/9/12 . chapter 2Great update . I'm glad your not gonna do the whole Huck being the shooter thing ... cause I don't think he is the shooter but moving on . I like that you brought the kids into the story . Can't wait to read more . |
Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 2 Good Stuff! Keep it coming! |
Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 2 Glad Olivia stood up to Mellie. This is not a great situation. But Mellie needs to understand that her marriage was dead before Olivia entered the picture. That's never a good situation to deal with, being the other woman, even if you are the woman , and not the other woman. But I digress. This is good. Keep it coming. |
travelgurl26 12/9/12 . chapter 2Omg I love this story! |
jetes 12/9/12 . chapter 2I approve you focusing on this story! You can update the others later. You're on a roll with this one. You're a great writer...keep it coming! |
Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 2 This storyy is so good i cant with till the next chapter |