Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Start at the Beginning
Sailorcelestial
2002-07-29 . chapter 1
I LIKE THIS!!! I like this a LOT!!! This was really great, the way it was set up. I do have ONE complaint. Although I understand what you were trying to do in being ambiguous... in the beginning, I thought the PATIENT was the old man... going to see a younger doctor. Like, youd started when the pilots were all old. I finally caught on, but it confused me for a little bit. Other than that, this is a really wonderful one shot. Great job! And KILL ff.net because they wont let me access the reviews!!!
Lilone
2002-07-27 . chapter 1
That story was cool. it took me a long time to get who the guy was! great ending too!
deathangel
2002-07-27 . chapter 1
that was really good! i like it a lot!
Landlady of the Universe
2002-07-27 . chapter 1
*sniffles* Aww, that was beautiful. Poor little Tro-kun. Who'da thought that Trowa would actually miss Relena? He he. Keep writing.
Return to Top