 Sailorcelestial 2002-07-29 . chapter 1 I LIKE THIS!!! I like this a LOT!!! This was really great, the way it was set up. I do have ONE complaint. Although I understand what you were trying to do in being ambiguous... in the beginning, I thought the PATIENT was the old man... going to see a younger doctor. Like, youd started when the pilots were all old. I finally caught on, but it confused me for a little bit. Other than that, this is a really wonderful one shot. Great job! And KILL ff.net because they wont let me access the reviews!!! |