|Reviews for Hikari|
| YourNightmare 6/4/13 . chapter 1
What. The. Hell. Kay, like you seem so stupid. Like, use proper grammar, dumb-donkey. Like, seriously. Freaking. Cut. Down. On. The. Mary. Sue. This is f'ing shiz. Cruddy, with no quality. Get a life and a tutor. And if I do say myself, get a private tutor on 'How to Indent.' So. All I have to say is... F OFF BITCH.
| Guest 4/12/13 . chapter 11
Too Mary sue man..not to be rude, but you honestly should get a beta, because the grammatical errors are if epic proportions, and the sueness will make readers gag.
| Guest 3/29/13 . chapter 6
shipper Hikari/Kaname? please
| emmawalters090 3/30/13 . chapter 11
| aleksjoly 3/29/13 . chapter 11
yuuki is turning evil...
| aleksjoly 3/24/13 . chapter 10
love your stories so much im addictied.i hope she end's up with kaname!
cant wait for more update pleases!
| MidnightCat2000 3/5/13 . chapter 9
awww poor hikari.
| Guest 2/2/13 . chapter 1
You know, I agree with yanagi. I hope I spelled that rig gt. If you dont do proper grammar and indent, it kinda becoms this giant blob of letters no ine can read. And you musf always indent when dialogue appears, and have to indent after that..just look in a nonmanga book and look at the grammar. Amd the chRacters seem a little OOC...
| Giang Tien 1/23/13 . chapter 9
Hmm... You know you could use hime as a suffix for hikaris name because hime means princess or something like royal I guess. But I may be wrong. A the horses name... I think silver blade would be better. But cery good story. Keep it up!
| Giang Tien 12/31/12 . chapter 8
Whoooo! Keep up the good writing!
| Guest 12/27/12 . chapter 7
zero and hikari are so kawaii together! _
| Giang Tien 12/29/12 . chapter 7
ah, that evil rido. god bless zero for getting rid of that evil demon...
| Giang Tien 12/29/12 . chapter 4
sounds like zero alright with the annoying fangirls and all. yup.
| Giang Tien 12/28/12 . chapter 1
you do know she is actually an aristocrat and not a amazing cross?
| NeonSakuraKiryuu 12/18/12 . chapter 4
Oh i eould love to see a jealous zero cant wait till the next chapter