What. The. Hell. Kay, like you seem so stupid. Like, use proper grammar, dumb-donkey. Like, seriously. Freaking. Cut. Down. On. The. Mary. Sue. This is f'ing shiz. Cruddy, with no quality. Get a life and a tutor. And if I do say myself, get a private tutor on 'How to Indent.' So. All I have to say is... F OFF BITCH.

Too Mary sue man..not to be rude, but you honestly should get a beta, because the grammatical errors are if epic proportions, and the sueness will make readers gag.

shipper Hikari/Kaname? please

awsome chapter

yuuki is turning evil...

love your stories so much im addictied.i hope she end's up with kaname!
cant wait for more update pleases!

awww poor hikari.

You know, I agree with yanagi. I hope I spelled that rig gt. If you dont do proper grammar and indent, it kinda becoms this giant blob of letters no ine can read. And you musf always indent when dialogue appears, and have to indent after that..just look in a nonmanga book and look at the grammar. Amd the chRacters seem a little OOC...

Hmm... You know you could use hime as a suffix for hikaris name because hime means princess or something like royal I guess. But I may be wrong. A the horses name... I think silver blade would be better. But cery good story. Keep it up!

Whoooo! Keep up the good writing!

zero and hikari are so kawaii together! _

ah, that evil rido. god bless zero for getting rid of that evil demon...

sounds like zero alright with the annoying fangirls and all. yup.

you do know she is actually an aristocrat and not a amazing cross?

Oh i eould love to see a jealous zero cant wait till the next chapter