Brilliant as always, Alorin.
I just want to read more now!
I'm glad to read that the job is going well, and you are happy and busy, but selfishly, I can't help wanting more of your time for this wonderful story too.

OMG. I can't believe I just spent a week reading this freaking awesome story for it to not be updated in 3 years! No! You said you weren't going to give up on this. Please continue! :(

It really is a great story...I hope you'll continue it...

If you are still actively writing Labyrinth fanfiction, I'd like to know why the HECK you havent finished this off already!

It's brilliant! It's long and fantastical and wonderfully absorbing! Get your head out of wherever it's been all this time and write some more... Even a chapter would do, for now.

I hate an unfinished story. One of epic length, built up plot and very relevant to my interests, especially. I will keep this page bookmarked and watched for as long as it stays here, I believe it worth waiting for.

To make a statement as I'm going to would be silly, having not actually checked whether or not you are still active, but I will, swept up in the moment. If you're gone, my letters will fall to dead eyes and go unheeded, but if you're still typing away there...

GET THE BLOODY HELL BACK OVER TO AND FINISH OFF THE BLOODY BLEEDY BLEEDING BLOODBLOODSY STORY!!

I find your fic to have given a significant contribution to Labyrinth fandom and have added it to my archive, Labyrinth Classics.

If you have any suggestions for fics that are not on the list but you consider to be Labyrinth classics give me a ring.

I have really enjoyed this story up to this point I only have one complaint at this moment and that is. . .WHERE IS THE END OF IT?! lol. . . I want to finish and I will feel unsatisfied until I do. Great story. PLEASE update soon!

please say you're gonna update within this year?!?!? it's been three years since your last update! please don't quit, it's an awesome story!

any chance of an update?

This is a really good story. I hope you'll finish it one day, I can't wait to read the rest :)

Well I will say thank you for a well written and very intense epic so far. I am very disappointed that it just stopped when it seemed it was finally getting to a conclusion. I hope you decide to complete this someday. It appears it has been a very long time since you updated, but I will hope. I'd really like to know how this ends. Thanks.-Clare

I love this story, and I'm very sad that you haven't updated it in years. Should you ever decide to continue, you have at least one faithful reader.

Hi! I just discovered your fic last week and already reached the end. This is by far the best labyrinth fic ever. I really hope you can finish it, but by the date of the last update I guess I can´t let my hopes go too high. I love your writting style, youre awsome! Anyway, I´ll put this in alert, can´t miss next chapter no matter how long it take to you to update n.n

Oh, I found this fic only now. My, how could I have missed this? I am in awe. The plot is superb. Really. I was wondering how come Jareth didn't remember Sarah. And now this revelation...Oh my. You know, I bet Sarah's pregnant now too... (Well, I just have to read more to see to that)

In general I think the writing is very good. Sometimes you might tend to explain too much (you know the rule "show, not tell"?), but not overly so. Very enjoyable fic thus far.

And now here I sit, not knowing what to do cause it's all gone. (sigh) You did a great job getting everything together in this chapter. Lol... see it's just like the Never Ending Story now. It's so strange that I caught that before. So let's recap. Brendon is learning magic and his presence is known now. Celest is going to be forced into a vision tomorrow, Sarah's teacher has been found and Jareth is being awkwardly silent. oh and our happy friends that are now on their quest to look for Sarah has come to it's first dead end. What is to happen to everyone one now? Will Sarah learn magic in time to save Brendon, or will Brendon perish? Once again I wonder if Brendon could control the Labyrinth? Will Jareth ever get back him magic, and without killing Sarah to get it? What will Corbin do when he finds out that his nephew is the boy deemed to die? Geez what will he do when he finds out Jareth is alive? Will he come to their aid? SO MANY QUESTIONS! Okay... now for the begging. Please please oh please keep going. I'm sad that this story hasn't been updated in so long. Please please please. I send you my muse. Here you can have her. (hands over her muse) You will make better use of her than I would. So there you go. I've given you my reviews, my love, my devotion, and now my muse. Start writing. Remember you promise. Please please please with sugar on top.

Finally he knows. I would really like to know what made him try to kill her. But then he stopped? So confusing. Gelyna really seems to have taken a strange turn. She's now concern for Brendon and wants to find Sarah to give him back. Here's a good question... If Brendon has magic and he's the Goblin Kings son and Sarah had magic... why is he sick? Why is his heart injured? I have decided to save the last chapter for tomorrow, but I am sending you an email now. at 12:15AM. Yea... exactly. See my devotion.