|Reviews for Animorphs: Another Story|
| TJ MARC 19 12/12/12 . chapter 1
I like the story in fact its almost sounds like the first book of the series. And I can realate to one or two charaters in the story. I like to read more of it ;D!
| GirlSwagg21 12/8/12 . chapter 1
PLEASE update soon! Will they meet the other animorphs? Will Ronnie find love? SO many questions-so little time! Update soon!
| Chiroptera Jones 12/8/12 . chapter 1
Your grammar is incorrect around the dialogue. You format dialogue like this:
"Hello," she said.
or "Hello!" she said.
The dialogue and the dialogue tag are part of the same sentence, so you don't use a full stop inside the dialogue. Even if you use a question mark or exclamation mark, it's still the same sentence. So 'he' or 'she' needs to be uncapitalised.
You need to keep an eye on your spelling too - 'Vesser three', 'fairy tail', 'stoped', 'gouned'.
On a more general note, I think you'd be better off with something a bit more snappy as a first chapter - something to hook your readers, you know?