The clones' hunt for Nivi was pretty intense, I'm glad she managed to evade them. I look forward to seeing what she does once she gets off-world.

Excellent start to the story! I like how you illustrated the clones' struggle to justify their actions in the face of Order 66. The exchanges between Nivi and the clones really built up a subtle intensity that carried the story along very well. The technicality of Jedi versus Jal Shey adds an interesting spin to it too. I'm looking forward to more!