I loved this. I loved John's deductions in the first parts of the book, and I loved the later depictions of their very deep and abiding friendship. Well done.

well all I can say, aside from I love love loved this, is thank goodness for that line about getting Sherlock in the ambulance; I was on the verge of a full bawl. wonderfully done.

There are... there are no words, to describe just how amazing this was. I am stunned right now. The only thing that I can think to do is beg for a sequel... so, here it is:
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASSSSSSE MAKE ANOTHER HOLY CRAB YOU ARE THE BEST PLEASE I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY!

Even if you don' t write another, thank you for writing this!

I loved it! Thanks for writing...

Fantastic story! I hope you write again soon. Your creativity is remarkably refreshing, and it adds a new spin to the "Sherlock Returns" theme.

Anyway, thank you for sharing your story with us readers. I, for one, really enjoyed it.

So good, you are an amazing author and you have themmost wonderful way with words. I applaud you my dear, I really do.
Cheers
Amirin

Oh gosh this was beautiful. I love the ending. Great story!

Terrifyingly absolutely brilliant. Thank you for this, I was stressing out about the ending, but apparently I picked just the right time to be reading. You capture them so well, and brought us through the full arc. I hope to see more work from you in the future, you're an excellent writer.

"Right" oh jeeze John, you have to be all proper and cute, don't you? I loved this story, I'm sad to see it end, but it was amazing!

Oh, what a great ending. It's what I always thought, too. John is remarkable. Thanks for the very entertaining read!

How human Sherlock can be sometimes - it looks like what they've been through together really have affected him deeply.
Thanks for the story, it was great to read.

The description of Sherlock running towards John and the urgency of this situation was just perfect. I really started to get all agitated, although my head knew you couldn't just kill John, but it felt so real, so dangerous. Very well written.

And I love your twists! I didn't see it coming, at all, but that way I enjoyed it even more.

By the way, the idea of John lying all alone in the middle of that stadium gave me the shivers... It's just so scary. A powerful image.

This is fabulous! Absolutely adore the sarcophagus bit and the horror of John having to uugh.
Are you a professional writer? Because if not you should be.

No! How could you let it end there? I'm hanging off the edge of my seat! Please update soon!

Wow! Interesting plot twist! Moran being honoarable? I didn't see that coming!

Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!