|Reviews for The Pass|
| JadeWolf96 1/19/13 . chapter 1
Love the idea of Mulan being married to Shan yu
| The Fox Boss 1/16/13 . chapter 1
Nice story, but what about Mushu?
| LaurelGrace 12/29/12 . chapter 1
... Wow. I had never even thought of this pairing before.
I guess I am now doomed to always want more, huh?
| Sakura Lisel 12/23/12 . chapter 1
I like it, but you should continue it or do a prequel to show exactly what happened all those years ago when Mulan was kidnapped, what her life was like with the Huns before she met and fell in love with Shan-yu and married him leading to her 'rescue'. HOW and WHY did she get 'rescued' and not simply be mistaken for another Hun girl, since nobody should have an idea of what she looked like as a teenager? Unless her dad was there on the raid and recognized her after being seperated for years (how old WAS she when she was taken from her birth family?)
| Wing-Gundamknight100 12/8/12 . chapter 1
wow, that was quite a twist
| Meluch 12/8/12 . chapter 1
This is a very intriguing story. I would love to see more of this, but it stands very well on its own. Good job!
| ArchAngelGundam 12/7/12 . chapter 1
An interesting take on things.
Keep up the good work.