So sad, but so good:-). Nice!

Some of the wording is arkward and I didn't understand that Henry was kicking around dead and observing, but when i reread it, I understood it better. Thanks for posting this. It was wonderful!

This is a great story - the way they killed off Henry was so unexpected, it's nice to think he'd still be hanging around. Well written.

awesome! I never saw that ending coming. Please write more soon. Sometimes more can be said with fewer words, as you've demonstrated

Very clever story. An explanation I hadn't thought of. I like it!

Oh my goodness! That short story packed a big punch! Very original.