This is incredible. How do you come up with this all by yourself? I was pretty sad that Tolkien didn't do an in depth history of Thorin though he did delve into it somewhat in maybe an Appendix I think. But you really did complete a lot of it here. Amazing work!

Aw, poor Thorin!

Well done.

I loved this story. There is so little stuff with Frerin, thank you for posting this story about him.

Oh my gosh... This was so touching! TT

You are a fantastic writer, don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise. ;D I hope you feel inspired to write more works of art like this, if you do, you can be cirtain I'll read them. C:

After seeing the movie, not only can I picture what the dwarves look like, but this scene almost exactly. Very nice. A few minor spelling errors, yes, but still well done.

*Is literally tearing up* Thank you! Keep writing!

Awww, that was so sad! :(

;_;