|Reviews for Death day|
| Sarah 3/23/13 . chapter 1
I'm sorry but, your story makes no sense what so ever I mean you need a full plot a "how Claire got kidnapped" and a full story line. I'm know I'm only 12 1/2 but I got a pretty good grasp on writing stories heck I'm evan writing a book right now. So maybe if you could edit it and make it make sense I think it would be really good.
| Justrockzyxxx 3/13/13 . chapter 2
I'm intrigued! Please keep updating!
| Maria EduardaB 3/12/13 . chapter 2
| Stephaniecrow9 3/11/13 . chapter 2
you should put more detail into the chapters because in the second part where Michael eve and shane were looking for Claire I had no idea what was happening but it seems like a good plot
| Stephaniecrow9 12/26/12 . chapter 1
pleaaase updata! this is really good! I want to know what happens next :Pxx
| flora 12/14/12 . chapter 1
Creepy...AND cool. Update soon!
| Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 1
I like it but I feel as though it's moving too fast.
I mean, in the first chapter she gets the phone call, the gang find out about people going missing and already Claire has been kidnapped. It's all moving too fast, maybe slow down a bit x
| clairebear97 12/8/12 . chapter 1
Omg update like now! This is really good, I would freak out if i got that phone call! Update please xx
| x Ragdoll Kitty x 12/8/12 . chapter 1
Neat story carry on :)
| Maria EduardaB 12/8/12 . chapter 1
I loved :O
| XxLost-In-The-EchoxX 12/8/12 . chapter 1
Love it update soon
P.S- you have a personal review , who will continually review everyone of your chapters :)
| Sobia 12/8/12 . chapter 1
Ooh please add more as its not even much SO SHORTTTTT!