|Reviews for Hunted|
| scottusa1 3/26/13 . chapter 17
Ohhh. So you're going to make this into a trilogy. That's cool. I'm sorry if I sounded like a douche earlier, it's just that having Marshall pop up out of nowhere raised a few questions. Since you have stated that it will be explained later, it should satisfy my curiosity. Thank you. Laters.
P.S. Could you please give Koen another weapon? He can keep his crossbow, but he can't rely on just that and Gaige won't always be around to help him.
| Epic Gamer 3/25/13 . chapter 17
like the new story also i got borderlands oc i got on deviantart so look up on deviantart my dA name "JohnnyTheEpicChhun" and see my oc Bulleye
| Guardian of all that exists 3/23/13 . chapter 17
| GJ115 3/20/13 . chapter 16
| Analyn Rockwand 3/19/13 . chapter 16
Make Gaige, Koen and Marshall go back to pandora, meet with the rest of the vault hunters, and hunt all the vaults they saw in the key!
| Cellshoes 3/7/13 . chapter 16
AWESOME! (as usual! )
A really cool ending for a cool story! It's good that they all survived and are now together! :)
I can't wait to read the epilogue! Will we know what happens on Pandora ? You're definitely a good writer and you know how to make a good story!
PS: the last sentence is true, Gaige IS fantastic!
| Epic Gamer 3/6/13 . chapter 16
good job hope you do the afterlife? after koen and gaige back on eden-5?
| scottusa1 3/6/13 . chapter 16
So that's it then? Happily ever after? If it is, then that's cool. But do you have an explanation for Marshall for just happening to get there at basically the time Koen does? Just what is Marshall doing there any way? I thought that contract was done. What reason would he have to even go there?
The whole family reunion thing I understand and makes sense, but Marshall's sudden appearance doesn't.
| GJ115 3/3/13 . chapter 15
Cliffhangers. Cliffhangers everywhere! But seriously I love this story and it keeps getting better and better with every chapter! Keep it up!
| Commander Hammer 2/25/13 . chapter 15
Nice chapter. Thanks for not letting Koen die. That would've been sad, and i don't like sad stories. Keep up the good work.
| Epic Gamer 2/24/13 . chapter 15
PLEASE GET KOEN WITH BACK WITH GAIGE!
| Cellshoes 2/24/13 . chapter 15
That was an awesome chapter! So 6 Vault hunters right? I only have one question... Is it the end? And if it is, are you planning on making another story? Anyway you're just the best author I read on this site, and I really hope to read more!
| scottusa1 2/24/13 . chapter 15
1. "...A shiny blue SMG digistructed into her hands and she passed it over to Gaige..." Is everyone able to digistruct things again, or is just a few things?
2. I'm by no means an expert in mental health, but don't just tell that Koen is miraclously cured. Like you said in the last chapter, his dementia is in his genetics, his blood. I'm pretty sure he'll still have those hallucinations and not just those 'happy' ones too. If its written into his blood, he will carry it for the rest of his life. Whether he seeks help, becomes better or not, is more or less up to him. Stuff like that can be treated, but never cured.
| mika.laylani 2/23/13 . chapter 15
Aww, such a sweet chapter! But...I didn't get to read Axton and Koen fight...it's okay! And, was this chappie inspired by the song, Don't you worry child? Because I saw the title, and I'm like in LOVE with that song! Hehe..enought of my ramblings...great chapter as always!
| scottusa1 2/21/13 . chapter 14
Hi, it's me again. I finished your other story yesterday and now I'm finished with what you got so far with this one. Man, Koen is definitely one messed up kid. I don't understand your choice of weapon for him. A Crossbow? All I say is while they are pretty cool, there are reasons they were phased out of service in favor of guns. Just saying.
Other than that great story. Keep it up. Laters.