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Brennend
2002-12-25 . chapter 8
Wow... This story arc is superbly done. I like how the author shows the cracks in the Ronins' relationships, like with Nasuti and with Touma. A really neat thing that was done in this story and the last is the balence between Anubis and Seiji, darkness and light, which i hope will come into play in later stories. The Egyptian resurrection was neat as well. I look forward to the next story arc!
toma
2002-11-29 . chapter 8
The Best thanksgiving Present!
kiss~~~
Anne Nonnie Muss
2002-11-28 . chapter 8
Awe, **! You cant just end it like that. gah. Anyway, happy thanksgiving!
Amyeyl
2002-11-28 . chapter 8
Bad Nasuti, bad. I generally don't like Ryo, but he's good for Seiji so she should go away. But happy story. Can't wait for the next one!
Split Persona
2002-11-27 . chapter 8
JC: I love this story to no ends! I am so glad you finally finished it. I can't wait for the next one.
Kathrine: EVIL, JEALOUS Nasutei...I like it! We haven't written a story where she's evil yet...guess I'll have to change that.
JC: But we're still working onn the one where a certain Trooper is rather evil.
Kathrine: You gave it away! I'm gonna kill you!
JC: Run, run, run as fast as you can but ya can't catch me cause I'm.......AAAHHHHHHH!!!!! it's YULI!!!!!!! (Both girls scream in the child's face before running to hide.)
toma
2002-11-13 . chapter 7
reread over and over:)
I'm so astonished by the fact that ur simple words and mild description always let me feel stabs in my heart.
I'm so obsessed in ur words and ur world.
I hope it'll never go to an real end:p
btw, do u think Seiji has loved Ryo for a long time no less than Ryo had loved him stealthily?
bandjunky01
2002-11-12 . chapter 7
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! don't leave it there!!!!! you muuuuuuuuuuust continue!!! pleas?!? very very good, losta good visuals and descriptions

2002-11-12 . chapter 7
U always astonish me!!
And oh~such touching scenes >0
Split Persona
2002-11-11 . chapter 7
JC: FINALLY!!!!!!!! They got it right!
Kathrine: Death is so cool! Who wouldn't want Seiji? Forget Arago!
Catherine: Ryo and Seiji are finally together. Maybe, Ryo can save what humanity Seiji has left. *_! I was so cute I'm crying.
JC: Quicher blubberin'. It was too good for you to ruin with sobs.
Kathrine: More soon please.
JC: We've even got inspiration from this. ^_^
Catherine: Please hurry with the epilogue! I can't wait.
Kathrine: This IS good if she's impatient. Keep up the great writing skills.
Amyeyl
2002-11-11 . chapter 7
Epilogue now. :sigh: Although waiting is sorta good, 'cause endings are bad. Especially bad when everything else is really good. But yay for updates! and epilogue means one more.
Then lots more, yes? A whole new bit. With an evil Nasuti perhaps? Bad Nasuti, bad.
Shadow of Arashi
2002-11-11 . chapter 7
Whaoh........... You go girl. I like it! ^_^ I'm glad they finally "did something right" as you put it, especially since Death's true plan really scared me!!! O.o;;; Awesome story and writing skills, please write the next part soon.
toma
2002-11-11 . chapter 5
T_T
i've just read the update message u left on blogspot....
I'm diven from top to bottom by that. I've been watiting so long for this new chapter, but haven't got a single thought of if it'll be the end of this story. tears~~~~~>0

2002-11-10 . chapter 3
waiting waiting waiting~~~~~~~
ganbalei!
devoted Seiji fan
2002-11-05 . chapter 6
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! please finish this!!!! it's a really good fic! i can't wait for your next chapter! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease finish!!!!
toma
2002-11-03 . chapter 6
that's the best fiction i've ever read. i mean it!
waiting urgently, and hoping for a at least hopeful end....
thank u so much for writing
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