Totally believable that Edmund is the one who did not fail to trust in Aslan. And his career is really fit for him. Did you know actor Skandar Keynes is also a writer (columnist)? What a coincidence! I loved that line! "Aslan saw me at my lowest and still loved me." Gosh, I think I melted there. Its so perfect! I think he'll be a lawyer if he didn't die on that train wreck.:((((

:'(

Ooh. If you are implying that Lucy turned away from Aslan, then she is definitely OOC. Lewis himself said that Lucy was the one most in tune with Aslan/Jesus, not Edmund.

It's 'Calormenes' not 'Calormenians'. But the one-shots are all good.

dude you just made me cry and like in my mind i am going Why Authoress Why?
Keep on the writes

Really poetic nice

So sad and bitter sweet. Theo must walk now on his own, with that guilty thought he'd never said sorry or goodbye. Like Susan in a way, although she had fallen away from Narnia she still loved her siblings.

Good chapter about lossof, and remembrance of the Valiant Queen by Theo.

Poor kid I never thought how there friends would react...

Oh, a sad one! But I do like it. It does indeed have a "Strange One" feel to it.

It's funny that last night I was just thinking about this fiction and wanting an update and here one is!

Oh, but next time, do something more light-hearted, please? I feel as though my friends are writing dreary on me-not that I didn't just right a dreary one, but sigh, there's been so much death, impending death, doom, and gloom lately in Narnia-verse.

This is set after the last battle, isn't it?
I've sort of re-read this story because the last time I read it was until manipulatory coercion.
You are an amazing writer.

Thanks for another great chapter update! Poor guy... it's always hard to loose someone you love, but especially when you regret something like that...

I was crying by the end of this chapter, even though I know the pensives went to a wonderful place where they were happy, I can't help but feel sad when I watch the movies and read the books.

I think this chapter might well be favorite in this story, so far. Well done.

wow i never thought that edmund wouldnt stop beliving in Aslan at some point and i also never thought that lucy would stop its kind f refreshin gto look at it in a different way...

It reminds me a lot of a Bible Study I started yesterday! We live as slaves to Him and our lives are for doing the will of our Good Master!

Great Job!