Oh, this is priceless! Please continue, there are so many ways that this can go wrong for our dear Ranma...and right for Akane o keep writing, please!

keep writing this story, i like where its going. just a little confused as to why he would call her cute while hes mad (even if it is the truth haha). good luck!

keep writing this story, i like where its going. just a little confused as to why he would call her cute while hes mad (even if it is the truth haha). good luck!

YES! Continue! It's actually a very _original_ plot...sort of...but anyway...CONTINUE!

Hm, I'm not so sure about the characters being

OOC. It seems called for in this story.

I like it so far, and I want to see more.

Just be careful with mixing up homophones like

your and you're.

Mmh, a backfired truth serum story? Thats bound to be interessting. Hopefully you will continue your line of thougt and produce some more chapters. I defently will keep an eye out for you now.

One editing boo boo. ?Where are you going Rona? Asked Kane.

I think spellcheck got you on that one. Next, when placing breaks between paragraphs, one blank line is sufficient. Actually, that one probably isn't your fault. Microsoft Word does some weird stuff sometimes.

As for Ranma being forced to tell the truth, it's a good idea for fanfiction because it's a story Takahashi could never have done. Think about it.

I like it :) simple and interesting (nice for your first fic imo)

continue plz :)

Definitely continue. :)

i like it tons of potential i'll definately be lookin out for more of this

Oh yeah definitely continue! Can't wait to see what happens next! And can't wait to see when Ryouga or P-chan shows up!

First off. Shampoo doesn't lace rammen with potions every single time he goes there. Only one time does it happena nd only once after does Ranma accuse her of doing it.

Second no way could Shampoo have made food the moment he got in.

Thirdly, Ranma obviously likes Shampoo since during the third ova he challenges her to a marriage duel. Thus he wants to at least be her friend if not have a relationship with her.

Finally, why would Ranma say "Akane, your so cute!" when she's mocking him?

You should put a lot OOC at the bottom.

This is not a flame simply my view, if you don't like it, then it's your problem.

Lol continue please

Ranma stuck in lier, lier... how is he going to keep from getting married if he has no way of lieing about his feelings towords Akane? Or keep his promis about P-chan...

This could be very, very funny so please keep it comming.

plz continue, this has soooooo much potential to be funny!