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| Reviews for Black Widow |
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   Chinagirl18 1/5/13 . chapter 7That Cora...so incredibly manipulative. A bit the Cora on Once Upon A Time. Ever seen it? Also, just a random curiosity question: how did you come up with the name "Cora Sinclair"? Seems very specific, and the "sin" part matches perfectly. Update soon! :D |
| Guest 1/4/13 . chapter 7 I'm liking this :) mostly an Artie/Vanessa shipper but I am really liking this. poor ol' Artie bear. |
| hilobrah 1/3/13 . chapter 6 This chapter makes me want to scream at Artie since he is already falling for her. Can't she accidentally fall down some stairs. She's evil. Did I mention I hate Cora? |
| KJay99 1/1/13 . chapter 6 Very nice. I like the way that you show how Artie is falling under her influence. The thoughts make sense- yet are twisted. :) Nice. And- it appears like there is another side to this Cora. Wonder what he end game is? |
| hilobrah 12/29/12 . chapter 5 You are a good writer. I hate Cora! Why can't Artie see through her manipulation? I wish she'd choke on one of Leena's cookies! All that said when is the next chapter coming out? |
| KJay99 12/27/12 . chapter 5 Heh. Nice chapter. Action packed! A few errors that I'll point out later. Yay for chapter releases! Niiice artifact! And Eep! She- us that- you- seem to have something about her- you thing... |
| snoble24 12/27/12 . chapter 5 is this the last chapter? i love this story and i want to be sure if this is the last chapter. if not how many more you think of doing |
| Aorta Heartless 12/25/12 . chapter 1 This is awesome. Keep updating! |
| snoble24 12/23/12 . chapter 4 great story so far. i really love it. i hope you get the next chapter up quickly. i want to see how this story goes and how it all works out. i hope none of the charecters from the show are killed. |
| steampunk-archer 12/22/12 . chapter 4 Is old Artie bear going to be in trouble? *gasp* not Artie... I gotta know what happens. |
| KJay99 12/22/12 . chapter 4 Heh. I like this chapter. Very interesting. But what is that paragraph where it seems to jump to Artie's pov- then back to the retirement home? Can you separate that somehow so that us poor readers get a heads up on it? Thanks! |
| KJay99 12/22/12 . chapter 3 Yay more! I feel like there's lots to comment on this chapter- but I just don't know enough to say something intelligent. So- I'll say... umm... nice story building chapter. and wonderful scenery. |
| steampunk-archer 12/17/12 . chapter 3 Very nice,I looks forward to more. Especially some Artie, he's just to cute:) |
| dragooonthegreat 12/16/12 . chapter 2 continue soon please? this is leading somewhere and if i were pete or myka i would not be staying in that hotel! |
| moxy 12/13/12 . chapter 2 Its heading somewhere keep it going :) |
