:D I WILL HUG YOU BACK NOW And it okay :)

Sorry, a bit time-pressed to log in. I just want to say it is nice to see you again. This chapter was not bad, a bit of grammar mistakes, but aside that, not bad. I had recently finished my own LotG fic in case you hadn't checked it out. Great job.

love it pm me back

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Good. Definitaly. Good.
Have eternal happyness from this review.

FINALLY! Btw you wrote hungry wrong, But it still good! ;3

Sure I don't mind :)

Can you maybe add my harpy eagle OC Harrison to the story. I'll describe him below

Name: Harrison
Age: Teen
Feather color: Light silver body feathers, black head feathers with a few golden feathers, darker grey wing feathers, and white feathers around his eyes.
Eye color: One eye is yellow the other is green
Talon size and color: They are the size of bear claws and are blood stained
Fav song: It's My Life by Bon Jovi
Armor: Shadow Black

If you add him I will be really happy

Awesome. I love this story! :D

I love it Crafty! :D Thanks for updateing! -hug crafty-

...CRAFT-BOY Make more! Why do you have to stop me from reading D8

Sad, but good. I should mention Akinda is supposed to be Echidna and Ga'hool is Ga'hoole, good either way, just little grammar issues.

This is a good start for a new story, and a second story also. There are just a few grammer mistakes here and thier, along with a few other things, but are to trivail for me to bother to point out, especailly when u are still new to writing. Good job once more, i liked it, though it isnt what i usually read myself, but i will stick with it and keep telling you how it was, have a good day, and remember to rest your mind, unlike i did so many times xD

Hmmm, very interesting, a bit of grammar problems here and there but good nonetheless. You should come check out my story Between Brothers sometimes, I think you might like it. (P.S. For the title, please put a apostrophe between the n and s in Guardians). Can't wait to see more.