So sweet! ;)

Funny, I was just wondering when you were going to post another chapter today. Haha! I liked the chapter but you have a formatting problem where some words are separated by a space. It probably messed up when you uploaded it, but it does make it a little difficult to read it fluently.

Great fluff! And very sweet kids! I've tried very hard not to like Estora's offspring but they are cuties.

I liked the fluff and the interaction between kari's and zach's families. I found the transition a little sudden to them being together. But if they've waited 12 years, why delay?! :P

;) thanks!

i really liked this chapter and couldn't stop smiling through anne and williams part. please update again soon.

Yay! I love it and I was so excited to see the update! I can't wait for the next one either! Wow, I use to exclamation points...she thinks as she runs off on a random tangent

Wonderful job. _ Keep up the good work!

Naughty matchmaking children . . .

Love it! I should have guessed that Zach's children would be adventurous little trouble makers :) am definitely staying tuned for the next chapter... Soon I hope!

It's getting good, can't wait for an update

Ahhh! You're killing me! Here I thought there would be a much bigger discussion between Karigan and King Zachary but you have thwarted me with a hidden note! :) But all together I really liked it, especially Karigan and Peters interaction. It really livened it up. Can't wait for the next chapter and what's in that note!

Wow this was brilliant! I really can't wait for the next chapter.

Yes! The chapter I have been waiting for, for so long! Yay! But... Oh, the suspense is killing me... Please write the next one quickly!

This could get interesting ;-) I like your writing style.